我有一个梦想 演讲稿 要关于黑客的 就是说我的梦想就是黑客 300就够了
我现在十分想当一名黑客，大家一听黑客就会感到可怕，其实我想当一名好黑客，为国家和社会做出贡献。假如我长大真当了黑客。
我会小心翼翼地进入恐怖组织重大决策部门的网络，了解他们的最新动向，破坏他们的数据，放置最先进的电脑病毒，再给他们来一些电子炸弹，让他们的美梦成泡影。让他们尝尝我正义黑客的厉害，让我成为他们的恶梦，让他们一天都不得安宁。
我还会潜入暴力网络，把病毒散入其中，使暴力不在网上传播，让他们耗费巨资却苦不堪言，让他们收工了。
我还会跟坏黑客做斗争，我会给银行制造一些软件，使每个进行网上“抢劫”的歹徒不能得逞，只能束手就擒。
我还会为儿童造个绿色程序，确保网站不受那些坏黑客的攻击。
妈妈说：“要想当一名正义的黑客，必须从小刻苦学习，丰富自已的知识面，尤其要学好英语。”我的英语成绩不太理想，为了将来能当一名黑客，我正在努力地赶上，李老师也在帮助我。
相信我，长大一定会成为一名伸张正义的好黑客。
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英语作文（“中学生该不该上网”的讨论，写一篇发言稿
The majority of students are in favor of the idea of surfing the internet.they believe it convenient to communicate with others on it and they can use their time as they wish. what's more, by surfing the internet, students can aquire the latest news from home as well as abroad. besides, their spare time activities can be widely enriched.
however, a few students are against such things. in their opinion, rather than trying to learn knowledge,most of the internet goers are playing computer games on it,which is a waste of time and money.some students they even drop off from classes to go to internet bars.so they argue that the time spent on the internet should be strictly limitted.
(the advantages and disadvantages of internet )
The following aspects could best illustrate the advantages of internet. netsurfers (网上冲浪者) in different countries can share interesting knowledge and the latest information. besides, internet has provided a major opportunity to buy and sell merchandise (商品). what is more, people may get medical help or even vote on internet. its advantages seem countless. Behind all this glowing talk, however, are some problems. internet makes people passive by stopping them making their own entertainment. so much so that when there is a breakdown or jam, people may find that world wide web turns into world wide wait. what is worse, some children have access to the scenes of violence and sex. apart from these, it can be affected by viruses(病毒) and hackers (黑客).
we should handle its problems, meanwhile we should exploit its potential as well. with proper management of internet people ought to experience more fruits of the information revolution. all the wisdom of the ages, all the information that has enlightened mankind for centuries, should be available to us with the healthy development of internet.
Every coin has two sides.So we should use the dialectical attitude to regard this problem .
谁能帮我修改一下这篇英语演讲稿？200分 英语 翻译 ！急 !!!!!!!
1.I’m glad that I can get this chance，不仅存在语法错误（没有 I ‘m glad that这样的句型，that从句什么成分来的，主语？？那I 呢？只有it is adj that……），而且比较低档， 改为I’m honored and delightful to get this golden opportunity，我很荣幸，也很高兴获得这样一个天赐良机。
2So I can’t help introducing myself at once虽然语法不错，但按照我们的习惯，很少人在谈到自我介绍时会说“我禁不住要立刻自我介绍……（怪怪的）”，改成So,please allow me to make a brief self-introduction to all of you here today！
3.My English name……naturally……不符合中国人自我介绍的习惯（一般都是先说中文名，再说英文名），,My name is Tang ZiJin ,of course（naturally用得很拗口），you can call me Kearns Jerry，that is my English name
4Everyone has a dream，平铺直叙，比较平淡，食之无味，如同鸡肋啊，这样美化一下，all people around the world cherish their dreams,which may be the same as the others’ ,or totally different from the others’，世界上所有人都有着他们自己的梦想，这个梦想也许和其他人的一样，或者完全不同
5Just use my dream to tell，是很不规范的中式英语，标准的英语是Just take my dream for example！！
6.When I was a little boy,it sound crazy，逻辑混乱，换成When I was a little boy,I was always be wondering it would be very,very crazy if I became a hacker one day in the future
7However，the dream is full ,the reality is slim可能人家听不懂，换个说法吧However，the fuller this(老是用the，听起来不爽) dream is ,the slimer the reality will surely be!
8Because I failed in the way twice不顺口，Because I failed twice in the same way
9So I am the first time I have failed很中式英语，so I failed the first time
10Time is flying换成Time is elapsing不是更妙吗？？？
11结尾部分不错 Thanks everybody换成 thank you so much for your concern！！！
12希望你能兑现200分的承诺 ，言而无信者一般都是……
13为了防止盗版 只能用图片了 白黑的 不好意思？？？？如果我真心要盗版的话，我把图片下载过来，我一个一个字，一个一个字地打，无论三五几分钟，还是十天半个月，我一定能打完的，那结果…………你这种反盗版的措施……呃…… 除非你用马赛克……
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